sábado, 3 de diciembre de 2016

Divorces

According to some adults, at the age of twenty-four and twenty-six, people start to think about their future, and they consider the idea of looking for a couple. However, only the 45% of people between these ages appreciate the idea of getting married, because they think they will divorce some years later.
According to myself, people who get married so early, will divorce so early too, because I imagine they don't know the people who they've gotten married. For instance, if someone gets married with a person they met a year ago, they have more possibilities to divorce, because they don't know so good their couple.
From my point of view, people have to know a lot the person they will spend their lives with, because if they don't know them it is so probably, they will get divorced.

1 comentario:

  1. Very good structure and development of ideas. Congrats!

    "they've gotten" = "they've got" (l.9)

    "to divorce" = "to get divorced" (l.11)

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