sábado, 3 de diciembre de 2016

My first day at high school

My first day of school was so horrible... It was on September 17 in the town's High School, I had met my friend Maria to go together to the High School, we were both so nervous, I remember so clearly that we were thinking about playing hooky from the school. The oldest students were so relaxing, because the weren't the new. At the end it wasn't so bad.

1 comentario:

  1. Be careful with:

    -use punctuation better, divide sentences with stops
    -relaxing = relaxed (l.6)
    -the weren't = they weren't (l.7)

    Grade: 7,5

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