lunes, 10 de octubre de 2016

Composition 1

As you can see, this photo show us a type of loch in the jungle, and I suppose people there are going to swim. Probably they'll have an incredible afternoon in a good vibe, from my point of view, this lake is so comfortable and it looks like a place where you can relax yourself. Although the water seems too cold, you can take a nap in the sand, read a book or do other incredible activities.

Both photos show natural places, but I think tath picture C is more relaxing than picture D. The pictures aren't similar. In picture C, people are spending their day in a beautiful place, and they are relaxed, but on the other hand, in picture D, I don't think people are relaxed, I imagine they are having a good time, but they are a little bit in alert, because they know they can be in danger, because leopards are violent. But well, if they are there, that means that they want it, so perhaps, they are not afraid and they are relaxed in their ways.

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  2. Your writing is of a very high quality, but just be careful using more stops and divide the paragraphs into more sentences.

    "this photo show" = "this photo shows" (l.1)

    "tata" = "that" (l.9)

    Grade: 9,25

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